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Sometimes I think of life
And how it would be without you
As I think I see myself
Lost and alone
With no one to help me
I'm just skin and bone
My heart is empty
I feel nothing inside
I'm scared of this
Someone open my eyes!
None of it is true
I'm dreaming right?
I open my eyes
And I see you
I suddenly realize
The truth in my world
That a life without you
Is like my own living hell
You wouldn't be there
To pick me up when I fell
And as you carry me in your arms
I'd wish to tell you what's true
When you look at me
I want to whisper out
I Love You
Poem by Me *RockinPyroGal :iconrockinpyrogal:

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TinTinHo Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Interesting and emotional. Thanks for sharing!
Just wanted to comment because no one has yet.

My only wish is that it would include more punctuation... But. Eh. It's fine.
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RockinPyroGal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Photographer
Haha thanks for the comment c: I really appreciate it ^^ When it comes to needing more punctuation what do you mean? o3o That way I can improve in my poetry and stuff in the future
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